sonic9234

Sorry for the long wait! If you noticed, I added a website, storywrite, which features new stories by me, and are completely different from the ones on dA. Please give it some love.

I'M BACK FROM CANADA!!!!! *eh!* (Yes, that accent really does exist. I didn't believe it at first.)

Also, I hope I can continue my fanfics, and I hope to see them uploaded soon. Sorry for the long wait. IB homework is killer, but the teachers are worth it. I can't give an exact time, but I'll see what I can do tonight when my parents pass out from the hard drive. (and possibly chloroform.... shhh.....)

I've decided to begin an original series, titled "The Gates of Hell." please review the first chapter I posted.

If you don't like me complaining about myself, just skip down to the fourth section. That's where the decent part of the journal entry comes.

Okay, so apparently, "Not Broken, Shattered," the first fanfiction I wrote, is still the most popular story. I personally, don't like it. The reason is, I can't get an ending. I hate stories that don't have good endings, and I doubt any of you would like me to force myself to write for an eternity about how one character cannot get past his own troubles. I like stories like those, but.....

1) I can't find a decent ending.
2) Action scenes are hard to put in.
3) I can't find a reason for Sonic to stop moping.

SO..... Here's the deal. I am going to give official permission to anyone who wants the story. Either PM through Fanfiction . net, or leave a comment on my journal page. Provided I notify you personally, I'll give you full rights to the story, provided you put in a small notation that the original story idea was by me. I know it's kind of a cheap shot, but I hope you understand.

I made this decision because I know a lot of people liked it, but I had lost interest in the story itself long before I moved to dA, actually around the time I wrote the first chapter to Insanity.

If someone responds, I'll post the beginning chapters of NBS here, and give whoever I choose the go-ahead.

Speaking of stories, I am just about to release the second chapter of Tarboy: Malpractice.

And please, tell me if you would just prefer I type a synopsis of the original work into the story. I really want SOMEBODY to leave a review.

Oh, and I'm going to begin typing an original story. To all of my real life friends who remember, Akimuno is still kicking, and 30 pages of that huge notebook ain't stopped him yet. You'll see him online before the break is over.

I've just made a new folder for my writing stuff. I'm actually just touching up my new story for Tarboy, a neat little animation, about six and a half minutes long, by James Lee. I pretty much damaged every surviving character, so if I'm found dead the next morning, it's probably because James killed me. You can find the original video in the link below. I would advise you to watch it before you read on, otherwise this may not make very much sense.

jameslee.deviantart.com/art/TA…

I'm going to put a real effort not to lose interest in this one, unlike all the Sonic stories I wrote. I really do like this one, and I have the first half of the first part done. I was going to make it a sort of three arc story.

Arc 1: Malpractice-- I'm giving Billy a more active role in this entire story. He's going to be the main character, and although he never really witnessed any of Tarboy's actions he is definitely affected by them. This actually is going to be a little slow, and dialogue heavy. However, it's still going to be interesting with the fact that in Tarboy's absence all has gone straight to hell. Egz is my antagonist, and as Hania (composer of Tarboy, and Wife to James Lee) suggested, Egz will be much darker, probably even more in my story. This first section is really going to be lining out the relationship between the lower to middle to higher classes of the world, especially with the people like Billy and Egz, as well as some of the new characters I will be throwing into the mix. I am about halfway done with this section.

Arc 2: Meurtrier-- Please tell me my french is decent enough. I believe this is "murderer." If not, someone PLEASE tell me what it really translates to, because I really don't want to offend any french speakers. Anyways, this will be the most action packed, but since everyone is robots, it really can't have that gore that I made my friends at school read, which I think made them feel like I needed another appointment with my therapist that day. I wanted to really bring out more details of the city Billy lives in, and have more underground forces that make them selves known to all people, bureaucrat and common people alike. Tarboy is going to really make his scene in this section, and I'll probably get hate mail from half of the people who'll read this section because of the flat out changes from the original animation.

Act 3: Miranda-- I'm pretty sure with all of the crime shows on TV, most of you are aware of what your Miranda Rights are. This will mainly take place in the courthouse, but there will still be some action present. Billy will realize just how important he is to the outside world, and (unwillingly) will bring hope in the end. This section is where the most fog is, as to how exactly it will happen, but I am hoping I will have a solid idea by the time I get there.

Also, I would like to ask one thing.

PLEASE LEAVE REVIEWS. Over the following weeks, I will be able to write my story (somewhat) uninterrupted. I'll do my best to release as much as this story as I can before school begins, and even then, I have all of the story so far loaded on Google Docs, so I will be able to edit and add to this fanfiction on my phone. But I lose interest of things VERY FAST, so I won't be able to continue any of my stories without some encouraging words.

That's all I have to say right now. I'll upload the first chapter within the next couple of minutes.

Thanks for coming to my page! I put all my stories in my scrapbook, just for anyone who asks.
I have only one fanfiction in the works right now, for a 6 and a half minute animation online called Tarboy. The first chapter will be released in the following weeks. If you haven't seen it, I suggest you do. It's really awesome, it even won Newgrounds Tank awards for 2009 video of the year.

Adios,
Sebastian